Thank you very much for reading and for the feedback. I am overjoyed by your comment. I have quite a lot of backstory that I left in the drawers, so expect to see Doru Moroiu make an appearance, and I will keep in mind your pointers.
As for the lawyer, being polite wasn’t that hard with such a pleasant client. I had to deal with much worse individuals.
I love the wit and flair of the Vampire and the awkward politeness the solicitor is holding on to is very amusing.
You could run and run with this - a detailed adventure or two from his previous life, what he makes of our modern world.
I'd really love to hear more about the metaphysical "feeding" process he uses to avoid spilling blood.....
Great work!
Thank you very much for reading and for the feedback. I am overjoyed by your comment. I have quite a lot of backstory that I left in the drawers, so expect to see Doru Moroiu make an appearance, and I will keep in mind your pointers.
As for the lawyer, being polite wasn’t that hard with such a pleasant client. I had to deal with much worse individuals.
Love the stylistic of this story... and how you bend the complexity with simplicity :)) well done