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Bence Ádók's avatar

Really love how the philosophy and geology of the land is intertwined within the story, really looking forward to its continuation next week.

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Stefan Baciu's avatar

I will admit that this is something I did not plan at all.

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Angela Marrant's avatar

It’s an awesome writing ✍️ I’m not sure (100%) where you are going with this mysterious fable… but it’s a good thing - not knowing 😁 - but yes it’s a long one. But I’m interested to read the ending.

The sad thing, I can relate to Stephanus… 😅

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Angela Marrant's avatar

You wrote it twice: “The mayor took him into his house, and they feasted on freshly caught fish, mutton, and game.” Or it should be so?

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Stefan Baciu's avatar

Lack of sleep, that’s the reason. Thanks for pointing it out. I will do it on purpose in part 2. And commit some other errors.

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Angela Marrant's avatar

lol ok :)) on purpose? its interesting...

And get some sleep, I finally got back to my usual habits and it feels soooo good :)

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